Sweet Symphony - Correction

This is a correction for MysterionRises6 on fav.me/d7mf8pa

The character was really cute, and even though I'm not perfect, I thought I could help a bit with some anatomy. As a disclaimer, these are all opinions on what I think. I'm not perfect, so neither is my art.

I didn't feel the need to tell you anything about the face or hands because I thought you were doing alright on those. And you have a completely different style than me. I don't want toe impede on that.

But getting down the business now, I highlighted the areas that I think you needed the most help with after lining your anatomy. Starting from top to bottom: The shoulders. I wasn't sure whether you were trying to make them slanted or not. Having them slanted would add a significant amount of dynamics to the pose, so I went with that. Just remember, if the shoulders are slanted one way, the hips are usually slanted the other way. 

Next: The right arm (our perspective) It seemed a lot thinner than the other arm and it was also a bit longer. It is hard to tell sometimes with the arm bent like that, but try to keep a check on it.

Waist and Hips: They weren't bad, but I think you should look at some pictures of actual females to see how they curve in real life. The references I gave are really good because they are similar to the pose you drew.

Next is the legs. The post the legs are in is really awkward. Try to do the pose in real life, and you will see what I mean. I changed it to a more relaxed position. Remember, you need balance, so since the hips are tilted, the legs need to support that tilt. One leg is more bent than the other because there is more pressure on it from the hips. 
That foot is also curved in more. It just seems more natural for that to happen.  

Hope that I've been helpful! Here are the stock photos I used fav.me/d4ulk0r fav.me/d72rbvj Thanks to faestock and  pyjama-cake for making them available. 

Have a nice day,
Your hopefully helpful friend,
RhiSabella